Well, my writing group would very definitely point that kind of stuff out to me, but then, they know I tend to start over here when I really want to, and need to be, over there. Also, I get lost in pretty descriptions when the story should be movinghuphuphup.
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Date: 2008-09-29 08:43 pm (UTC)